Thanks to all who entered
the 2006 A Fighting Chance Essay Contest!
The winner is...
Joshua, Pine Crest Elementary (now attending Sanford Middle)
Grand Prize winner of an XBOX 360 and 2 one-day
park passes to Universal Studios/Islands of Adventure
The essay appears exactly as submitted:
"just
as adam hit the swicth mr. gunner was gone they didn't know
were he was and he didn't know weather he was in meased up
world were birds were swimming fish were flying and dogs
took the place of humans and they were walking pepole so
he wanted to get to the bottom of it so he cranked up his
harley and went to investigate every dog was looking at him
and every person was barking at him and the dogs were saying
to one another what\'s that humon doing why isn't he on the
ground like the rest of the people some one should report
this to mayor bark and they and bark sent for him to see
what was going on and as soon as it when throw to the police
they were on there way when they finally got to him they
tried to arest him (and take him to mayor bark) and when
he tried to show them the his bage they sicked the k9 (whicth
was accually a human panted on the side) then they finally
after about 30 min they caught him and impouned his harley
when they got him to mayor bark he asked were he was from
he said earth mayor bark replied in a laughing platter of
spit and what ever he had from lunch that was stuck in his
teeth came out and hit mr gunner right in the faceand finally
after the tsynamiy of spit and food he said that your not
on earth anymore your in the 15th dimson mr gunner asked
quckily if therewas a back he said i don't known but if there
is you should go see profeser kibble up that hill right over
there as mayor bark pointed to a dark hill of terero and
horor but at that time mr gunner would do any thing to home
right know so he took the challenge first he had to get his
bike back but he found out that mayor bark ordered that the
harley to be deliverd in the front of the buliding and he
said thank you to mayor bark before he left know he was on
his way to profeser kibbles labatory it was very compared
to mayor barks story in fact he was there in lest than a
5 min when he got there he didn't knockl or anything he just
drove throw the door and into the lab by then profeser kibbles
knew he was in the building and had already grabed his ultra
ray gun and it at mister gunner but mister gunner used his
clumsy powers and bumbed right into him and the ray gun went
flying and so they got up and mister gunner asked if he had
a tellaporting devise and he said he was working on one and
said it might take you back to plante earth mr gunner said
that he would take the chaces no matter what so he jumped
back on his harley and drove into the machine then profeser
kibbles swicth it on and poof he was gone like that then
at the zone everyone was sad because mr gunner was gone then
there was a loud boom and comboom then all of a sunndeient
mister gunner came rideing out of c-1 and in the zone everyone
was happy that he was bnack and a live they all wanted to
know were he was he said he dosen't know and dosen't want
to know but he's glad he's home."
And the runner-up is...
William, Central Avenue Elementary
Winner of 2 one-day park passes to Universal Studios/Islands
of Adventure
The essay appears exactly as submitted:
"Maybe Rodney got out of jail and is bying more cocaine.
Then he goes to a bank and is telling people to give him
all the money they got. Then Joesph Glaradi comes in and
calls back up but he's a ghost so they can't hear nothing.The
only way to fix him is to go back in the c-1.He can't do
this because nobody can see him the only one who can see
himm is the 10 year old boy named William. so william saw
him and went to get the 8yh graders. And then they figure
out what happened and turned him back. Then he goes to the
bank undercover and arrest Rodney."
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